July 2023 · ORIGINAL INSTRUCTIONAL EXAMPLE

Essay 4: Criminal Law and Procedure
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July 2023 California Bar Examination · Fact-specific analysis, an issue outline, and pointers on the official question.

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QUESTION 4 Deborah was homeless and without money. One night, the temperature was below freezing and continuing to drop. Deborah realized she might die if she did not find shelter. She found a run-down house with an attached garage that had a door connecting it to the house. Deborah thought the house was unoccupied2. She went around to the side of the garage, looked through a window, and saw a stack of wood. Deborah decided to go into the garage, take some of the wood1, and build a fire outside the garage to keep herself warm. She broke the window to get into the garage. Because of the extreme cold, Deborah decided to stay in the garage. She gathered wood scraps and paper, started a small fire to keep herself warm, and fell asleep. A spark from the fire ignited some oil on the floor. Deborah awoke to flames and smoke. She then escaped through the window she had broken. The fire quickly engulfed the house where it killed Stuart as he was sleeping in his bed. Officer Oliver, who was patrolling the area, saw Deborah walking on the sidewalk3 three blocks from the fire. When Officer Oliver asked her what she was doing outside on such a cold night, Deborah said, “I started the fire.” Deborah is charged in criminal court and moves to suppress her statement “I started the fire.” 1. With what crime or crimes can Deborah reasonably be charged; what defense or defenses can she reasonably raise; and what is the likely outcome? Discuss. 2. Should the court grant Deborah’s motion to suppress her statement? Discuss.

Before you write: issue outline

  1. Evaluate entry intent at the moment of entry and malice separately for each offense.
  2. Distinguish involuntary manslaughter, malice murder, and felony murder.
  3. Apply necessity to the emergency and identify the absence of custodial interrogation.

Property offenses

Burglary

Common-law burglary is a breaking and entering of the dwelling of another at night with intent at entry to commit a felony inside. Deborah broke a window and entered at night. The attached garage connects directly to the house and is likely part of the protected dwelling. The house was in fact occupied by Stuart; Deborah’s belief that it was empty does not necessarily defeat its objective status as a dwelling.

At entry she intended to take another’s wood and burn it outside. That is an intent permanently to deprive its owner, since consumption destroys the wood. Burglary traditionally includes intent to steal, although jurisdictions defining the necessary ulterior crime strictly as a felony require attention to whether the contemplated theft qualifies. Modern burglary statutes often cover intent to commit any theft. Her decision to stay and make a fire inside occurred after entry and cannot retroactively establish an entry intent to commit arson. Necessity is the central defense to the entry and intended taking.

Larceny and property damage

Larceny requires a trespassory taking and carrying away of another’s personal property with intent permanently to deprive. Moving the wood scraps to consume them in a fire can satisfy the taking, slight asportation, and intent requirements. A separate reasonable belief that the wood had been abandoned could negate the relevant intent, but believing a run-down house unoccupied does not establish that all contents were ownerless. Breaking the window also supports a modern criminal-property-damage charge. No particular statutory grading or value threshold is supplied.

Arson

Common-law arson is the malicious burning of another’s dwelling. The house burned, and the attached garage forms part of it. Deborah intentionally lit a warming fire, but did not necessarily intend to burn the building. Malice can nevertheless rest on reckless disregard of an obvious substantial risk of such burning. Lighting an uncontained fire among wood and paper inside a garage and then sleeping supports that inference.

Deborah argues that she made only a small fire, did not know of the oil, and sought warmth rather than destruction. Ignorance of the oil does not resolve whether the overall fire risk was obvious and consciously disregarded. If the prosecution proves only negligence, common-law malicious arson is not established, though a statutory reckless-burning offense may apply.

Homicide

Deborah’s fire actually caused Stuart’s death, and spreading fire that kills someone inside the connected house is a foreseeable consequence rather than an extraordinary intervening event.

Murder and felony murder

Intent to kill or seriously injure is absent. Depraved-heart murder requires a sufficiently extreme conscious disregard for human life. Starting a garage fire and falling asleep is dangerous, but Deborah’s belief that the house was empty weakens the inference that she consciously disregarded a grave risk to a person. The prosecution can challenge the reasonableness and sincerity of that belief; the facts do not compel malice murder.

Felony murder may apply if a qualifying burglary or arson is proved, the death occurs during its commission, and the jurisdiction’s predicate-felony, causation, and merger limitations are met. Both are conventional predicates in many formulations. The fire occurred while she remained in the entered premises and was using the wood; it is not merely an unrelated death long after completion. A successful defense to the predicate or failure to prove the required arson malice can defeat that route. A modern statute may impose additional culpability requirements, so felony murder should not be announced as automatic.

Involuntary manslaughter

A killing caused by criminally negligent or reckless conduct, without murder malice, supports involuntary manslaughter. Even if Deborah honestly believed the house empty, making an indoor fire and sleeping beside it could be a gross departure from reasonable care. This is a strong alternative if malice or a valid felony-murder predicate is not proved.

Necessity and other defenses

Necessity generally requires an imminent serious harm, a reasonable belief that violating the law is needed to avoid it, no adequate lawful alternative, and a harm avoided greater than the harm caused. Deborah faced below-freezing temperatures that were still dropping and reasonably feared death. She is not stated to have created the weather emergency. Entering an apparently empty building or taking a little wood can be a proportionate response if no accessible shelter or other lawful option existed.

The prosecution can argue she could seek help elsewhere and that lighting a fire inside, rather than using shelter alone or the intended outdoor fire, was unnecessary. Those alternatives must be evaluated in the actual emergency, not assumed available. Necessity is stronger for the entry and limited taking than for creating an uncontrolled indoor fire. Some jurisdictions restrict necessity as a defense to homicide; an unintended death should still be analyzed through the offense’s required culpability. Extreme cold also may bear on her judgment, but the facts do not establish insanity, duress by another person, or a complete absence of voluntary action.

Suppression of the statement

Miranda warnings are required before custodial interrogation. Oliver encountered Deborah walking on a sidewalk and asked what she was doing out on a cold night. No arrest, restraint, coercive surroundings, or other indication that a reasonable person would feel under arrest appears. This is an ordinary public encounter, not custody. The question also is not framed as an accusation calculated to extract a confession; her admission goes beyond its apparent concern.

No force, threat, promise, or police exploitation of her condition is stated. Cold and distress alone do not establish police coercion making the statement involuntary. There is no unlawful detention or charged-proceeding interrogation on the record. The court should deny suppression.

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