February 2023 · ORIGINAL INSTRUCTIONAL EXAMPLE

Performance Test: State v. Hughes
Sample Answer & Question Pointers

February 2023 California Bar Examination · An original oral argument opposing suppression using the supplied file and library.

By Bar Exam Doctor · Published November 4, 2026

Practice first, compare second

This is an original, ungraded instructional response. It is not an official State Bar selected answer, a scored student submission, or a claim of attorney review. Use it to compare reasoning and organization after attempting the question. Alternative reasoned analyses may be possible.

Official clean questionDownload question markup

The actual question, with pointers

Official source text with our added highlights and numbered notes. The PDF preserves the source layout. For the PT, the task, file, and substantive library pages appear below; the complete packet includes the instructions and dividers.

Read the marked-up question and teaching pointers

Official source page 14

OFFICE OF THE STATE ATTORNEY County of Gaston Littleton, Columbia MEMORANDUM TO: Applicant FROM: Jan Dauss, State’s Attorney DATE: February 21, 2023 RE: State v. Hughes Defendant, Sebastian Hughes, is charged with murder after he fatally stabbed his uncle, Peter Gault, during a dispute over a Corvette car engine. Defendant asserts he acted in self-defense. A centerpiece of our case against Defendant is a recorded statement Defendant made to detectives while he was in the hospital recovering from a stab wound inflicted by his uncle. Defendant originally moved to suppress the statement based on a failure to be given Miranda warnings. The judge ruled in the State’s favor on that motion. Defendant now argues that the statement was not voluntary and therefore should be excluded from his trial. The court decided that this new motion does not need to be briefed, but the court does want oral argument1. Please draft the oral argument I will give in opposition to suppression of the statement. Our success depends on our ability to marshal the facts. Do not start with a statement of facts as you would if you were writing a brief. Rather, weave the specific facts into your argument as they relate to each of the elements of the controlling law.

Official source page 15

Attached are the transcript of the recorded statement and a portion of the transcript where the court refused to suppress the statement on Miranda grounds. While you are not to address1 the Miranda issue, the court’s characterization of the interview may be helpful to your argument.

Official source page 16

State v. Hughes Transcript of Pretrial Hearing February 17, 2023 COURT: Let’s first deal with defense counsel’s motion to exclude Defendant’s statement for failure to be given Miranda warnings. I have read counsels’ briefs and listened to the recorded statement. I have decided that the circumstances in this case overwhelmingly demonstrate that Defendant was not in custody for Miranda purposes. The motion is denied. Does Defendant plan any other motions? DEFENSE COUNSEL: Your Honor, Defendant moves to exclude the statement made while confined in the hospital as involuntary. At the time of his questioning, Defendant was not sufficiently lucid and the coercive surrounding circumstances of the questioning were such that, under the United States Supreme Court’s Mincey v. Arizona, his statement was not the result of a rational intellect and free will. Defendant was at the complete mercy of the detectives because he was in physical shock from being stabbed in the lung and in mental shock from being involved in the death of his uncle. I think everyone will agree that Defendant sustained a stab injury. He had to go through surgery in order to recover from that injury. He was administered pain medication. Further, he was still under the constant care of a medical professional while the interview began and as it progressed. I don’t know exactly what the medication was at that point, but it was pain medication consistent with surgery. COURT: Does the State stipulate to these facts?

Official source page 17

DISTRICT ATTORNEY: We certainly do not stipulate to the allegations characterizing the lucidity of Defendant or the coercive nature of the questioning. It is also unclear what medication Defendant was on at that point. The rest of the facts we would concede. COURT: All right. As I said, I have listened to the recording of the statement. I don’t think I need briefs on this motion. The law is pretty straightforward. I would, however, like to hear counsels’ arguments on the point. Let’s schedule those arguments five days from today at 9:00 a.m. See you then counsel.

Official source page 18

Transcript of Interview of Sebastian Hughes with Detectives Ray and Martindale August 22, 2022 DETECTIVE RAY: Good evening Mr. Hughes, I’m Detective Ray and this is ….. HUGHES: He’s dead? RAY: If you mean Peter Gault, yes, he’s dead. Mr. Hughes, this is my partner, Detective Martindale. We need to ask you some questions about what happened. You understand you’re not under arrest, right? You do? You’re nodding yes. Are you able to speak? HUGHES: I’ve got tubes in both my lungs and I’m a little drugged up, but yeah, I can speak. It’s just, I can’t believe it. RAY: We need to interview you. Our job is to come in when someone passes away. We weren’t there. We don’t know what happened. If it’s okay, we are going to tape record our interview. HUGHES: It’s okay. RAY: We are starting the interview with Mr. Sebastian Hughes in the surgical observation unit of the hospital at 7:50 p.m., after calling the hospital about three or four times throughout the day to see if you were well enough to speak with us. We understand that you were injured around 11:30 this morning. You’ve been in the hospital about 8 hours. You got out of surgery two hours ago. Just for our record, Mr. Hughes, I want to describe what I see. Mr. Hughes is shirtless and lying down kind of in a quasi-seated position with his back kind of at maybe a 45– degree angle in his bed in his room. Mr. Hughes has redness or an abrasion on his forehead, and a stab wound on his right side near the right chest area under the armpit.

Official source page 19

Can you tell us what happened? HUGHES: I’ve got to call my mom. RAY: Mm–hm. What happened? HUGHES: I received a phone call from my mom’s brother, Peter Gault, this morning around 11:00 o’clock. He wanted to know the whereabouts of a Corvette engine he had been storing in the garage of my mom’s house. I had sold the engine for $800 several months ago, and told him about the sale at that time. I reminded Peter that he had sold the engine to me and I figured it was mine to sell. He became angry. RAY: Mm-hm. HUGHES: I heard my mom crying in the background. I feared for her safety because Peter had a short temper and he was hot-headed when it came to her. I decided to leave work and drive to the house to make sure she was okay. RAY: Did you go directly there? HUGHES: I’ve really got to call my mom. RAY: Yeah, yeah, will get to that. So, you were at work and decided to leave. What happened next? HUGHES: I stopped at my work locker on my way out and placed an eight-inch wrench in my shirt pocket as protection, just in case it came to that. UNIDENTIFIED VOICE: Excuse me officers, I’m from Cardiology and need to draw some blood from Mr. Hughes. RAY: We’ll get out of your way here.

Official source page 20

HUGHES: You guys aren’t leaving1, are you? RAY: No, we’re not going anywhere. We will turn the tape off while medical staff draws blood and Detective Martindale and I stretch our legs. BREAK IN RECORDING RAY: Okay, we’re back, Mr. Hughes. We left off just as you were going to the house. What happened when you got to the house? HUGHES: Peter and my mom were standing in the driveway in front of his van. Peter was furious. My mom stood between Peter and me, crying her eyes out trying to keep us separate. She grabbed the wrench from my pocket. I guess to make sure I didn’t use it on Peter. We argued at first. Then things got wild. Eventually, Peter knocks me to the ground. He pushed my mom a couple of times and grabbed the wrench from my mom and tried to hit me with it. At some point, Peter either dropped the wrench or threw it at me. Somehow, it ended up on the ground. RAY: So what happened then? HUGHES: I bent down and tried to pick up the wrench. Peter said, “You’re not gonna do anything with that,” and kicked me real hard on the right side of my forehead. I wound up on the ground between the van and the truck. He had the wrench in his hand. RAY: Mm-hm. HUGHES: Peter ran to the back doors of his van. I thought he was going to grab a knife or tool from the van. So I pulled my knife from my boot. Peter saw me getting up with the knife and ran toward the front of the van and got his own knife. I chased him. He tripped

Official source page 21

and fell near the porch, but got up right away. He lunged at me, saying, “I’m gonna kill you,” and that’s when I stabbed him with my knife. RAY: I’m sorry. I guess I missed where your knife comes into the story. Were you wearing the knife while at work? HUGHES: Yeah, I guess I forgot to mention that I got it from my work locker when I got the wrench. I placed a big knife in my boot, underneath my pant leg. Because, you know, I know how he is. I realized I had been stabbed only when I saw blood all over myself and could not breathe. I thought I was going to die and walked over to a neighboring house to lie in the shade. RAY: Do you think that, if you didn’t bring the knife, your uncle would be alive right now? HUGHES: Probably, but I would still be in the hospital. RAY: How do you know that? HUGHES: I know. This was all self-defense, man. If I had not stabbed Peter, Peter would’ve killed me. You guys don’t know what that man was capable of. Look, I see you’re skeptical. You can give me a lie detector test, or check my phone records, or talk to my family to confirm the truth I’m telling you. RAY: We may do that Mr. Hughes, but for now I think we have enough. You’ve been generous with your time and we need to let you rest. HUGHES: I may stay awake. I’m going to try to watch the University of Columbia game on TV. I went there for a couple of years. RAY: Enjoy. We’ll be in touch. Interview concluded at 8:20 p.m., August 22, 2022.

Official source page 24

State v. Perdomo Columbia Supreme Court (2007) Defendant Gerson Perdomo was involved in a single-car accident in which he and another occupant of the car, Marco Quinonez, were seriously injured. A third occupant, Ismael Rodriguez, was killed. Defendant was convicted by a jury of felony vehicular manslaughter while driving intoxicated. The only seriously contested issue at trial was whether Defendant was the driver. After a night of heavy drinking, at around 2:45 a.m. on August 23, 2003, Defendant was allegedly driving on the freeway at approximately 80 miles an hour when he crashed into, and nearly went over, the concrete center median. Rodriguez, found in the back seat, was pronounced dead when taken to a nearby hospital. Quinonez and Defendant were found in the front seat. Each had serious injuries. Defendant based his defense on the contention that the other surviving occupant, Marco Quinonez, was driving at the time of the accident. Defendant moved pretrial to exclude the evidence of inculpatory statements he made to the police officers. Near the end of the interview, Defendant admitted he sometimes smoked marijuana and then said, “Maybe that day I was smoking. I’m not going to mess with you guys. I was driving Marco’s car.” Defendant argued that admission of his statements violated his Fifth and Fourteenth Amendment rights to a fair trial. He claims it was error of constitutional dimension to admit statements he made to officers who interrogated him in the intensive care unit of the hospital while he was recovering from surgery and heavily sedated with narcotic pain medications.

Official source page 25

Defendant suffered severe traumatic injuries to his chest area. Several of his ribs were fractured. He underwent emergency surgery to remove his spleen. He also had some bleeding in his brain. Four days after the accident and Defendant’s surgery, medical personnel in the intensive care unit of the hospital finally granted Officer Laubscher and his partner Officer Jensen permission to speak to Defendant. Medical personnel directed the officers to keep their discussion brief. Around 6:30 a.m., the officers interviewed Defendant in the intensive care unit of the hospital. The interview was tape recorded. Defendant was lying flat on his bed, recovering from the splenectomy, broken ribs and head injury. He was in obvious pain. Defendant had received his last pain medication five and a half hours earlier. He was still connected to intravenous solutions and monitors. He had been on a ventilator since the surgery, but this device had been removed the day before and he was breathing on his own. Defendant’s speech was slow and deliberate but not slurred or overly raspy from the intubation. The officers’ questions were also slow, subdued and deliberate. The interview, with numerous pauses, lasted approximately 20 minutes. The officers questioned Defendant about the events occurring before and after the accident. Defendant’s answers were responsive to the officers’ questions. Most significantly, according to Officer Jensen, who was present and later transcribed the tape, Defendant admitted he had been driving the car when the accident occurred. A statement is involuntary if it is not the product of “a rational intellect and free will.” Mincey v. Arizona (U.S. 1978). The question posed by the Due Process Clause in cases of claimed psychological coercion is whether the influences

Official source page 26

brought to bear upon the accused were such as to overbear petitioner’s will to resist and bring about confessions not freely self-determined. In determining whether or not an accused’s will is overborne, an examination must be made of all the surrounding circumstances, including: 1) the characteristics of the accused, including such factors as the defendant's maturity, education, physical condition, and mental health (including mental acuity), and 2) the details of the interrogation that indicate coercion, which include the length of the interrogation, the location of the interrogation, and the interrogation's continuity. Additional factors that might indicate coercion include whether the officers dominated or controlled the course of the interrogation; whether they allowed defendant to tell his story, then asked follow-up questions to clarify the details; whether their questions were open-ended and neither aggressive nor particularly accusatory in nature; and whether there is evidence that the officers had or drew weapons or otherwise employed threatening or intimidating interrogation tactics. No single factor1 is dispositive. Defendant asserts there are numerous parallels between his case and the factual circumstances of Mincey v. Arizona, sufficient to find his statements involuntary and require reversal of his convictions. Surrounding Circumstances 1. Characteristics of the Accused In Mincey v. Arizona, Mincey was shot in the hip by police officers in a raid on his apartment. Mincey was transported to the hospital where he received emergency treatment. When he arrived at the hospital, he was almost to the point of coma. The shot caused damage to the sciatic nerve and partial paralysis of his right leg. In the emergency room, tubes were inserted into his throat to help him breathe, and through his nose into his stomach to keep him from vomiting. A

Official source page 27

catheter was inserted into his bladder. He received various drugs, and medical personnel attached a device to his arm so he could be fed intravenously. Mincey was then moved from the emergency room into the intensive care unit. Around 8:00 p.m., a police detective came to the intensive care unit to interrogate Mincey. The detective told Mincey he was under arrest for the murder of the police officer. He gave Miranda warnings to Mincey and then started questioning him about the activities and shooting at his apartment. Mincey could not talk because of the tube in his mouth. He responded to the detective’s questions by writing answers on pieces of paper. The detective continued to question Mincey until almost midnight. During the interrogation, Mincey repeatedly asked for the interrogation to cease. Several times, Mincey requested the assistance of counsel before responding. He complained to the detective that the pain in his leg was unbearable. Some of Mincey’s written responses were incoherent and on their face showed he was confused and unable to think clearly about the events at his apartment or about the interrogation. The Supreme Court concluded Mincey’s statements were not the product of his free and rational choice: “To the contrary, the undisputed evidence makes clear that Mincey wanted not to answer Detective Hust. But Mincey was weakened by pain and shock, isolated from family, friends, and legal counsel, and barely conscious, and his will was simply overborne. Due process of law requires that statements obtained as these were cannot be used in any way against a defendant at his trial.” Like the situation in Mincey, here Defendant was questioned while lying in a hospital bed in the intensive care unit. As in Mincey, no family members or friends were then with him. He was recovering from surgery for the injuries he received four days earlier. Intravenous tubes were still attached to his body. Defendant had been receiving narcotic pain medications since his admission to the hospital.

Official source page 28

According to the interrogating officers, Defendant appeared to be in pain and also appeared to still be under the influence of the narcotic pain medication. However, this is where the similarities end. Unlike what occurred in Mincey, Defendant was not interrogated within hours of his injuries, and not interrogated only a few hours after receiving medical treatment. Also unlike in Mincey, Defendant was not interrogated while going in and out of consciousness. In this case, the officers were not permitted to interview Defendant until four days after Defendant’s surgery. Hospital personnel did not permit the officers to talk to Defendant until they determined he was “alert,” “oriented,” and could “obey commands,” as indicated by his medical chart. By this time, Defendant no longer needed the assistance of a respirator and medical personnel had removed it the day before the interview. On the day of the interview, hospital staff determined Defendant’s condition had improved sufficiently so that he could safely be cared for in a regular hospital room. At 8:30 a.m., and two hours after the interview, Defendant was moved out of the intensive care unit, taken off intravenous pain medications and thereafter given oral doses of Vicodin for pain as needed. The evidence showed Defendant was probably still under the influence of the pain medications, although the effect of the morphine he received five and a half hours earlier had likely diminished over the hours. Nothing on the tape shows Defendant’s thinking was impaired by the medications. Defendant’s speech is slow and deliberate, but is not slurred or incoherent. Each of Defendant’s answers is appropriate to the question asked. In some instances, his answers were detailed. For example, when asked the name of the security company for which they all worked, Defendant stated the name for the officers, spelled out the company name several times, and even recited the company’s telephone number.

Official source page 29

At the beginning of the tape it appears Defendant was even alert enough to attempt to deceive the officers. He initially told the officers the night of the accident that he had been driving his mother’s Nissan, alone, and without passengers. He later acknowledged being with Rodriguez and Quinonez in Quinonez’s mother’s Honda. 2. Details of the Interrogation In Mincey, the detective ceased the interrogation only during the intervals when Mincey lost consciousness or received medical treatment and after each such interruption returned relentlessly to his task. The statements at issue were thus the result of virtually continuous questioning of a seriously and painfully wounded man on the edge of consciousness. Most importantly, the interrogation in the present case exhibits none of the coercive police activity found in Mincey and other cases finding statements to have been involuntary. The interview in the present case was relatively short. It lasted a maximum of 20 minutes, as compared to the three hours Mincey was forced to endure. The officers in the present case posed their questions in a calm, deliberate manner. The officers’ voices on the tape are very quiet and subdued, perhaps in deference to the other patients in the unit, and/or because of the relative lack of privacy in the room. The 20-minute interview includes several pauses as well, as medical personnel enter and exit the room providing treatment for the other patients. Unlike Mincey, who had asked for the interrogation to cease and had refused to answer some questions without the assistance of counsel, Defendant made no such requests and did not express distress or otherwise indicate any unwillingness to speak to the officers. As the trial court noted, the officers’ tone was conversational and not threatening. One of the subjects discussed was how supportive and attentive Defendant’s mother had been. Defendant expressed gratitude for his recovery. He

Official source page 30

asked the officers questions regarding his friends’ conditions. At the end of the tape the officers wish Defendant good luck and a speedy recovery. In short, the record is devoid of any suggestion the officers resorted to physical or psychological pressure to elicit statements from Defendant. Absent some indication of coercive police activity1, an admission or confession cannot be deemed involuntary within the Due Process Clause of the Fourteenth Amendment. The judgment is affirmed.

Before you write: issue outline

  1. Draft oral advocacy for the State without an opening factual narrative.
  2. Apply both groups of voluntariness factors from the supplied Perdomo opinion.
  3. Confront the recent surgery and requests to call his mother; omit the resolved Miranda issue.

Your Honor, the State asks the Court to deny the motion because the recorded interview shows that Mr. Hughes spoke through a rational intellect and free will. Under State v. Perdomo, the Court considers both the defendant’s characteristics and the details of the questioning. Serious injury and a hospital setting warrant careful scrutiny, but do not establish involuntariness by themselves. The question is whether police pressure, considered with the defendant’s condition, overbore his ability to choose. The record here shows a coherent man choosing to explain and defend his actions during a short, conversational interview.

Mr. Hughes’s answers demonstrate an alert and rational mind

Perdomo directs the Court to consider maturity, education, physical condition, mental health, and mental acuity. The defense properly emphasizes that Mr. Hughes suffered a stab wound near his chest, underwent surgery, and was interviewed about two hours after surgery and eight hours after the incident. The State does not minimize that injury. But the claimed inability to reason must be tested against what he actually said and how he participated.

Mr. Hughes gave a chronological account beginning with an approximately 11:00 a.m. telephone call. He identified the disputed Corvette engine, its $800 sale, the prior transaction with his uncle, his mother’s distress, his trip from work, and the shifting locations and weapons during the fight. He explained not only what he did, but why: he feared for his mother, took a wrench for protection, thought his uncle might retrieve a weapon, and believed stabbing was necessary to save his own life. Those are responsive, connected statements rather than confusion or random assent.

His delayed acknowledgment of the concealed knife also matters. He first discussed the wrench, and disclosed that he also took a large knife from his work locker only after the detective noticed the missing part of the narrative. The State does not ask the Court to determine his guilt from that omission on this motion. It demonstrates his ability to select details and manage his account, much as Perdomo found the defendant’s initial effort at deception inconsistent with a mind unable to think rationally.

He also recognized the detectives’ apparent skepticism, insisted that he acted in self-defense, and proposed ways to corroborate his story: a lie-detector test, phone records, and interviews with his family. Those suggestions show initiative and an understanding of the investigation. At the end he discussed watching a university game and his own attendance at that university for a couple of years. His educational background and engagement reinforce the evidence of mental acuity. The record does not disclose his exact age or a mental-health diagnosis; the State relies on the demonstrated capacities, not invented personal history.

The recent injury is significant, but this interview is far removed from Mincey

As described in Perdomo, Mincey was nearly comatose after a shooting, unable to speak because of a breathing tube, and intermittently incoherent. He communicated in writing while repeatedly asking for questioning to stop and for a lawyer. The detective persisted for hours despite his barely conscious condition.

Mr. Hughes was speaking aloud, sitting partly upright at approximately a 45-degree angle, and providing a detailed account. There is no indication that he drifted in and out of consciousness, that his answers were incoherent, or that he could not understand the questions. He had injuries on his forehead and near his chest, but the transcript supplies no comparable inability to communicate.

The defense’s best distinction from Perdomo is timing. Perdomo was interviewed four days after surgery and after staff had determined he was alert and oriented; Mr. Hughes was interviewed the same day as surgery. We cannot pretend that the shorter recovery is immaterial or claim an identical documented medical clearance. The detectives did, however, call the hospital three or four times to determine whether he was well enough to speak. More importantly, his own sustained responses show the intellectual functioning the defense says was absent.

Medication must likewise be evaluated on evidence. The State concedes treatment and pain medication but has not stipulated to a particular drug, dose, timing, or resulting impairment. Perdomo explains that even narcotic medication does not automatically render a statement involuntary when the recorded responses remain appropriate and detailed. We do not claim the medication had worn off or was harmless. We submit that no demonstrated impairment, combined with coercive police conduct, overbore this defendant’s will.

The interview’s length, manner, and interruption support free choice

The interview began at 7:50 p.m. and ended at 8:20 p.m., a maximum elapsed period of thirty minutes including a medical interruption. That is somewhat longer than Perdomo’s twenty-minute interview, but substantially shorter than the prolonged questioning described in Mincey. It was not a relentless effort extending late into the night through repeated loss of consciousness.

The detectives explained their investigative purpose and asked whether recording was acceptable. Mr. Hughes agreed. They used open prompts such as asking what happened and what happened next, then allowed him to narrate. Their follow-up about the knife clarified a conspicuous gap; questioning a suspect critically is not itself coercion. Nothing indicates that weapons were drawn, threats were made, physical force was used, or medical care was conditioned on cooperation. No promise of immunity or leniency appears.

When a cardiology employee needed to draw blood, the detectives made way, paused the recording, and took a break. Mr. Hughes asked whether they were leaving. That spontaneous question is powerful evidence that he wanted the conversation to continue, rather than that the officers were forcing it on an unwilling patient. Their return after the medical break therefore was not comparable to Mincey’s detective resuming questioning despite repeated demands that it cease.

At the end, Detective Ray said they had enough, thanked him for his time, and said he needed rest. Mr. Hughes responded that he might remain awake to watch the game. The exchange fits a short, conversational investigation, not an interrogation conducted until a weakened man surrendered his will.

The requests to call his mother do not establish coercion on this record

Mr. Hughes twice said that he needed to call his mother. Detective Ray redirected him and then said they would get to that. The State acknowledges that these responses were dismissive of a real concern. The Court should weigh them, especially because he had described his mother’s distress and was separated from family during recovery.

But those statements were not requests to end the interview, refusals to answer, or assertions that he would speak only after contacting someone. There is no evidence that the detectives threatened to deny contact unless he confessed or used his mother’s welfare as leverage. He continued with a detailed account, asked that the detectives not leave during the medical break, and offered corroboration. Considering the entire recording, the two redirections do not show that his choice was overcome. They differ materially from Mincey’s repeated ignored requests for questioning to stop while he was barely conscious.

The total circumstances require denial of suppression

Perdomo makes clear that no single circumstance resolves voluntariness and that a confession cannot be deemed involuntary under due process without coercive police activity. The State is not asking the Court to treat a hospital statement as automatically voluntary or to ignore the recent surgery. We ask it to consider the actual combination here: coherent and selective narration, understanding of the investigation, a short interview with a medical break, open questions, no threats or promises, and the defendant’s own indication that he wanted the detectives to remain.

His self-defense claim and the reliability of particular details remain matters for trial. The present question is whether his statement was the product of free and rational choice. Under Perdomo and its explanation of Mincey, the record establishes that it was. The State respectfully requests denial of the motion.

Sources and further comparison

The official question controls its facts and jurisdiction. These responses address the exam scenario; subsequent legal changes and other fact patterns may require a different analysis. The PT uses the supplied fictional Columbia library, which must not be replaced with outside law.