Headings help a reader see which question you are answering and how the reasoning fits together. They also help you notice when a requested claim, party, or defense is missing before time expires.
Mirror the assignment
Start with the divisions in the call of the question. If the question separately asks about two parties, make those divisions visible. Within each division, use issue headings that are specific enough to explain the paragraph's purpose without turning into an entire sentence of analysis.
Keep the hierarchy consistent
Use one level for the main question and another for its significant subissues. A paragraph should belong under the heading above it. Avoid creating a new heading for every sentence, and avoid burying an important defense inside an unrelated discussion. Consistent hierarchy makes the answer easier to review under time pressure.
Let headings support reasoning
A persuasive heading can state a position where appropriate, but it does not replace the paragraph beneath it. A neutral issue label may be clearer in an essay. The best choice depends on the assigned task; a PT brief and an exam essay need not use identical heading styles.
Worked example
Before and after: headings that expose coverage
The call separately asks about Party A's request and Party B's response. Under Party A, two supplied requirements are disputed. The original answer contains one heading, ‘Discussion,’ followed by several long paragraphs.
Starting approach
Discussion → facts, general rule, both parties mixed together, conclusion.
A stronger approach
1. Party A's request → Requirement one → Requirement two. 2. Party B's response → Applicable defense or limitation. Use only subheadings supported by the actual question.
Why the change matters
Read the revised heading list without its body. It should reveal the requested parts and where the major analysis belongs. Then read each paragraph and ask whether it fits the heading above it. Moving a paragraph may solve more than adding another heading. A heading that announces the outcome still needs facts and reasoning beneath it.
Common mistake: Do not create a heading for every factual sentence; a hierarchy should organize analytical units.
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In your next online essay practice session, use the exercise below to test this writing skill. Compare the result with scored answers and grader comments to identify the next repair.
Try this in your next session
Read only the headings of a completed answer. Write a one-sentence description of what the answer appears to cover. Compare that description with the actual call of the question and repair any mismatch.
Your practice checklist
Put the method into practice.
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