February 2022 · ORIGINAL INSTRUCTIONAL EXAMPLE

Essay 1: Criminal Law and Procedure
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February 2022 California Bar Examination · Fact-specific analysis, an issue outline, and pointers on the official question.

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QUESTION 1 Jim and Fred armed themselves with handguns and drove to a store on Avon Street. They both went into the store, drew their guns, and demanded that Salma, an employee, give them the store’s money. After Salma handed Jim the money, he nervously dropped his gun. The gun discharged1 when it hit the floor, and the bullet hit and killed Chris, a store customer. Salma then got a shotgun from under the counter and shot Fred2, killing him. Jim picked up his gun, ran out of the store, and drove back to his apartment. Later that evening, Jim saw Salma while walking down Park Street. Thinking that he could eliminate her as a witness, Jim shot at Salma with his gun, but the bullet missed her. Jim then drove away in his car. A few minutes later, Police Officer Bakari saw Jim driving down the street. Officer Bakari, who had no knowledge of the events at the store or on Park Street, pulled Jim over because Jim looked nervous3. When Jim got out of his car, Officer Bakari noticed a bulge under his shirt. Officer Bakari then patted Jim down and found Jim’s gun. Officer Bakari arrested Jim for possession of a concealed firearm and seized the gun. 1. With what crime(s) could Jim reasonably be charged regarding the events at the store? Discuss. 2. With what crime(s) could Jim reasonably be charged regarding the incident on Park Street? Discuss. 3. Under the Fourth Amendment to the United States Constitution, can Jim successfully move to suppress Jim’s gun from being introduced into evidence at trial? Discuss.

Before you write: issue outline

  1. Analyze the accidental customer killing separately from the clerk’s killing of a robber.
  2. Attempted murder requires an intent to kill; a later missed shot supplies a distinct offense.
  3. Test the initial stop before considering whether the bulge justified a frisk.

1. Crimes at the store

Robbery, conspiracy, and related offenses

Robbery is a trespassory taking and carrying away of another’s property from the person or presence by force or intimidation, with intent permanently to deprive. Jim and Fred jointly drew guns, demanded money, and took it from Salma, its lawful custodian for the store. Jim completed robbery even though the money belonged to the business rather than Salma individually. Slight movement suffices for carrying away.

Their coordinated arming, journey, and demands support an agreement and shared intent to rob; those preparatory acts also satisfy an overt-act requirement where applicable. Conspiracy ordinarily remains distinct from the completed robbery. Both directly participated, so accomplice liability also supports responsibility for acts within the joint criminal enterprise. Larceny and the threatened-force component may be lesser included offenses rather than additional cumulative punishments.

Pointing guns can constitute aggravated assault under a threat or attempted-battery formulation, depending on the victim’s apprehension and governing definition. The completed money-taking supplies the principal robbery charge. Modern statutory burglary may cover entering a commercial building intending theft; common-law burglary’s dwelling and nighttime requirements are not established for this store, so it should not be asserted automatically.

Chris’s death

Chris died from Jim’s gun discharging during the robbery. The accidental discharge negates an obvious purpose to kill Chris, but not felony murder. Robbery is a traditional independent dangerous predicate, the killing occurred during its commission and immediate sequence, and handling a loaded gun during an armed robbery creates a foreseeable fatal risk. Actual and proximate causation are strong. Under the traditional felony-murder rule Jim may be convicted of murder without proving a separate intent to kill; many statutes grade robbery felony murder as first degree.

A depraved-heart theory would separately require extreme conscious disregard of life. Bringing and drawing a loaded gun supports danger, but nervously dropping it does not conclusively establish that higher mental state. Criminally negligent or reckless involuntary manslaughter is an alternative if murder elements fail. The appropriate convictions and merger rules prevent punishing every overlapping homicide theory as a separate killing.

Fred’s death

Salma, resisting the robbery, shot Fred. Under the agency approach to felony murder, a justified killing by a victim or law-enforcement opponent is not a killing committed by the felon or an agent in furtherance of the felony. Jim therefore ordinarily is not liable for Fred’s death under that approach. Courts also commonly limit felony murder for a cofelon killed in lawful resistance.

A jurisdiction using proximate-cause felony murder may reach a foreseeable death caused by armed resistance to the robbery, potentially including Fred, depending on its treatment of cofelon deaths. Provocative-act murder is another possible jurisdiction-specific theory if Jim intentionally committed a life-endangering act beyond what suffices for the underlying crime and the required malice and causation are shown. It is not established simply by labeling all robberies provocative. The answer should identify the governing approach rather than announce universal liability for both deaths. Salma’s defensive response is foreseeable, but foreseeability alone does not satisfy the agency rule.

2. The later shot on Park Street

Attempt requires the purpose to commit the target crime and a sufficient act toward completion. Jim intended to eliminate Salma as a witness and fired at her. That establishes specific intent to kill and goes beyond preparation under both substantial-step and dangerous-proximity approaches. Missing does not negate attempt. The deliberate witness-elimination motive also supports premeditation if the jurisdiction recognizes that grading for attempted murder.

Aggravated assault or attempted battery is supportable even if Salma never saw the shot; a fear-based assault additionally requires awareness of the imminent threat. No completed battery or murder occurred because the bullet missed and no injury is given. Statutory witness-intimidation or obstruction charges may apply if their elements are met. The later shooting is separate from the robbery’s res gestae after Jim returned home; it should not be treated as an automatic continuation of felony murder.

3. Suppression of the gun

The Fourth Amendment applies to Bakari’s police conduct. A traffic stop seizes the driver and ordinarily requires reasonable suspicion of a traffic or other crime. Bakari knew nothing of the robberies or shootings and stopped Jim solely because he looked nervous. Nervousness alone, without specific circumstances linking him to crime, does not ordinarily provide reasonable suspicion. Nothing identifies a traffic violation or independent basis for the stop.

After a lawful stop, a reasonable suspicion that a person is armed and dangerous can support a limited outer-clothing patdown. The visible bulge would support a safety concern in an otherwise valid encounter. But a frisk rule does not retroactively justify an already unlawful seizure. Likewise, the later discovery of the gun and probable cause for concealed possession cannot bootstrap the original stop into legality. Search incident to arrest would require a lawful arrest supported independently of the tainted discovery.

The gun was found as an immediate product of the unlawful stop, with no intervening event or attenuating circumstance. No independent source, inevitable lawful discovery, or applicable good-faith reliance appears. Jim can challenge the invasion of his own person and seizure; the gun’s connection to serious crimes does not remove the exclusionary rule. It should be suppressed in the prosecution’s case-in-chief, subject to the ordinary limits and exceptions not established here.

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