October 2020 · ORIGINAL INSTRUCTIONAL EXAMPLE

Essay 5: Remedies
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October 2020 California Bar Examination · Fact-specific analysis, an issue outline, and pointers on the official question.

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QUESTION 5 Daniel’s house is for sale. In his living room are two valuable original paintings by Artist, one of the California coastline and the other of a field of Golden State wildflowers. Daniel recently refused an offer from Museum to purchase the paintings for $10,000 each. Pam went to Daniel’s house hoping to buy it before she left on a business trip. As Pam, Daniel and his real estate broker, Bill, inspected the house, Pam noticed the paintings in the living room, commenting that they were beautiful and seemed designed to fit in the house. Pam then offered $400,000 for the house and another $50,000 if the sale included the two paintings. Daniel agreed and asked Bill to draft a contract for the sale of the house and the two paintings for $450,000. Bill promised to have the contract ready before Pam left town the next day. Bill drafted a written contract, which Daniel signed even though he noticed that Bill had mistakenly omitted1 from the sale the painting of the California coastline. Daniel met Pam at the train station, as her train was about to depart. Daniel gave the contract to Pam, telling her, “This is what we agreed to and I’ve already signed it.” Pam’s train started to move, so she quickly signed the contract without reading it2 and jumped on board the train. When Pam returned from her trip, she was horrified to find that the California coastline painting was not in the house. She immediately telephoned Daniel to ask about the painting, but he told her, “That’s what the contract we signed provides,” and hung up. Six months after Pam moved into the house, she noticed in a local newspaper advertisement that Daniel was offering to sell the Artist painting of the California coastline to the highest bidder at an auction two weeks later3. 1. What remedy or remedies can Pam reasonably obtain against Daniel? Discuss. 2. What defense or defenses can Daniel reasonably raise? Discuss.

Before you write: issue outline

  1. Reform the writing to reflect the agreement, then analyze delivery of the unique painting.
  2. Treat rescission and damages as alternatives with different consequences.
  3. Address failure to read, parol evidence, delay, and prejudice without excusing Daniel’s deception.

1. Reformation of the written agreement

Pam and Daniel agreed to a $450,000 package consisting of the house and both original paintings. Bill mistakenly omitted the coastline painting from the writing. Reformation is an equitable remedy correcting a written instrument that fails to express the parties' actual agreement because of mutual mistake or an appropriate combination of unilateral mistake and inequitable conduct, including knowing exploitation of the other party's mistake.

The original bargain is unusually specific: $400,000 for the house and an additional $50,000 for both paintings. Bill was instructed to put that package in the contract. Daniel noticed the omission but signed anyway, then affirmatively assured Pam that the document reflected their agreement. Even if Daniel's knowledge prevents characterizing the mistake at signature as mutual, Pam's mistake combined with Daniel's knowing deception strongly supports reformation. Bill's testimony and the earlier conversation provide evidence of the antecedent agreement, which ordinarily must be established clearly and convincingly.

Reformation would insert the omitted coastline painting rather than create a bargain the parties never made. The $450,000 price remains the agreed package price. Once corrected, the writing supports enforcement of the obligation to transfer that painting. The remedy is particularly useful because it lets Pam retain the house and obtain the missing component of the exchange.

2. Specific performance and immediate protective relief

Specific performance generally requires an enforceable sufficiently definite contract, the plaintiff's performance or readiness to perform, inadequate legal damages, and a balance of equitable considerations supporting relief. Although money often suffices for ordinary goods, an original work by a particular artist is unique. A different painting or a refund of an estimated market value would not necessarily give Pam the particular coastline work chosen to complement the house.

The house has been transferred and Pam has moved in; the question indicates completion of the transaction apart from the missing painting. Assuming she paid or is prepared to pay the agreed price, she can seek delivery of the painting under the reformed agreement. If the painting component is analyzed under the UCC, the special remedy for unique goods reinforces the same conclusion. If the mixed real-property transaction is governed principally by common-law equity, uniqueness still strongly supports performance.

Daniel's auction is scheduled in two weeks. Pam should seek prompt interim relief preventing transfer pending adjudication. A preliminary injunction generally requires an appropriate showing of likely success, irreparable harm or inadequacy of damages, and favorable balancing of hardships and public interests; a temporary restraining order may preserve the property if notice and timing requirements are met. The planned sale creates a concrete danger that the unique object will pass to a third party and complicate effective relief. Maintaining possession with restrictions on sale causes less hardship than allowing Daniel to dispose of an object he had agreed to convey. A court may require security.

An injunction preserves the opportunity for final specific performance; it is not itself an award of the painting without a merits determination. Pam should identify the specific artwork and present the prior agreement and Daniel's conduct rather than rely only on her emotional attachment to it.

3. Damages and possible fraud relief

Alternatively, Pam can seek contract damages placing her in the financial position performance would have produced, together with adequately proved foreseeable consequential loss. The relevant loss is the value of the promised but undelivered component, subject to the bargain and governing damages rules. Museum's rejected $10,000 offer is evidence of value, not a binding appraisal or a ceiling on recovery. The $50,000 package increment covers both paintings and likewise is not automatically the damages amount for the single omitted work.

Daniel also made a false statement of existing fact when he said the writing reflected the agreement, knowing that it did not and intending Pam to sign. Pam signed in reliance and lost the promised painting. Those facts support intentional misrepresentation or fraudulent concealment, subject to proof of justified reliance and resulting damage. Her rushed departure and Daniel's express assurance strengthen reliance despite her failure to read.

Tort damages and, with the requisite proof, punitive damages may be available for independent fraud. Punitive damages do not follow from ordinary breach of contract alone. Pam cannot recover the full value of the painting and also receive it without an adjustment; equitable and monetary relief must avoid duplicate compensation. Incidental losses, interest, or other distinct proved harm may still require consideration. No general attorney-fee entitlement is supplied by the facts.

4. Rescission as an alternative

Fraud or material mistake may permit rescission, unwinding the package transaction with restitution. That would require Pam to offer restoration of what she received, including the house and the other painting, subject to appropriate equitable adjustments for use, expenses, and benefits. She cannot ordinarily rescind the entire purchase while keeping all its benefits and recovering the entire price.

Rescission may be less useful than reformation and performance because Pam has lived in the house for six months and apparently wants the promised package. She also discovered the omission on returning from the trip. Her retention of the property after learning the truth gives Daniel an argument that she affirmed the bargain or delayed too long to rescind. That argument requires attention to the applicable promptness rules and surrounding circumstances. It does not necessarily bar a claim to enforce the bargain as actually made, which seeks correction rather than avoidance.

5. Daniel's defenses

Daniel will invoke the signed writing, the statute of frauds, and the parol evidence rule. The writing ordinarily is strong evidence of terms, and both land and high-value goods can raise writing requirements. But reformation exists precisely to correct an instrument that misstates an actual agreement, and evidence of mistake and fraud is not automatically excluded as an attempt to add an unrelated oral promise. The prior agreement supplies the terms to be restored; the remedy does not simply disregard every writing requirement.

Failure to read can defeat a party who signs carelessly and later dislikes clear terms. Here Daniel knowingly exploited a drafting error and affirmatively misrepresented the document just as Pam's train departed. Equity is unlikely to let him use her failure to read as a complete defense to his deliberate deception. Any merger associated with conveyance of the house also does not necessarily extinguish a separate promised transfer of artwork, particularly where fraud or mistake is established.

Daniel can assert laches based on six months of inaction after Pam learned the painting was missing. Laches ordinarily requires unreasonable delay and resulting prejudice, not passage of time alone. He still possesses the painting, and no innocent buyer or material detrimental change is described. Pam's delay weakens the urgency of a claim based solely on the original omission, but the newly advertised auction supplies a current threat. Daniel's own inequitable conduct further weakens his request for equitable protection. The strongest result is reformation, prompt preservation of the painting, and eventual specific performance, with damages or rescission analyzed as alternatives rather than cumulative windfalls.

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