February 2020 · ORIGINAL INSTRUCTIONAL EXAMPLE

Essay 4: Evidence
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February 2020 California Bar Examination · Fact-specific analysis, an issue outline, and pointers on the official question.

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QUESTION 4 Des is on trial in a California superior court for possession with intent to distribute hundreds of pounds of cocaine from January through October in 2019. At trial the prosecution called Carol, a severed co-defendant, who had pleaded guilty to reduced charges in exchange for testifying against Des. Carol testified that through 2019, she had acted as a “distributor” for a ring of cocaine dealers. In that role, Carol had sold hundreds of pounds of cocaine to many people, including Des, during the period of the charged crime. Carol further testified that all her customers agreed to sell cocaine. The prosecutor asked Carol to identify a notebook, which Carol testified was hers, and which she used to keep track of income and expenses related to the cocaine sales as each occurred1. Carol testified that on pages 1 – 2 of the notebook were notations of sales of cocaine from January through April of 2019 by Carol to various people other than Des. She further testified that on pages 3 – 4 were notations of sales from May through October in 2019 to various people, including Des. The court admitted pages 1 – 4 into evidence. On cross-examination, Des’s attorney asked Carol if the prosecutor, Pete, had offered her a reduced sentence in exchange for her testimony. Carol answered, “No.” Des’s attorney then called Carol’s attorney, Abe, to the stand and asked him the same question. Pete asserted attorney-client privilege. The court denied the assertion of privilege, and Abe testified that the reduction of charges3 against Carol had been in exchange for Carol agreeing to testify against Des. Des took the stand and denied the charge. On cross-examination, Pete asked Des if it was true that eleven years earlier2 he had been convicted of forgery, a felony. Des answered, “Yes.” 1. Assuming all credible objections were timely made, did the court properly admit: a. Pages 1 – 4 of the notes? Discuss. b. Evidence of Des’s conviction for forgery? Discuss. 2. Did the court properly deny the assertion of attorney-client privilege? Discuss. Answer according to California law.

Before you write: issue outline

  1. Apply California law, including Proposition 8, rather than federal conviction time limits.
  2. Distinguish the notebook’s business-record foundation from any coconspirator alternative.
  3. Separate confidential legal communications from a plea bargain made with the prosecutor.

1. California framework and relevance

The trial is criminal and in California superior court. California's truth-in-evidence provision generally favors admission of relevant evidence, but preserves important statutory exceptions, including hearsay rules, privileges, and the court's Evidence Code section 352 power. It is not a universal authorization to admit every relevant statement. Each item requires its own foundation and balancing.

Carol's records of sales to Des from May through October tend to show possession, quantity, repeated purchases, and an intent to redistribute during the charged period. They are highly relevant. Records of earlier sales to other people do not directly establish a purchase by Des, but may explain the scope, operation, and chronology of the distribution business and the nature of the notebook. Their independent probative value and potential for guilt by association require more careful consideration.

2. The notebook and hearsay

Carol's written descriptions of sales are out-of-court assertions if offered to prove that those transactions occurred. Her presence as a witness does not by itself eliminate the hearsay problem. She can authenticate the notebook by identifying it as hers and describing how she kept it. Authentication and a hearsay exception are distinct requirements.

The business-record exception is a strong basis for admission. A qualifying record is made in the regular course of a business, at or near the recorded event, with a knowledgeable custodian or other qualified witness explaining its identity and mode of preparation, and circumstances supporting trustworthiness. Business is broadly understood for this purpose; an illegal drug enterprise is not automatically excluded from maintaining records of its operations.

Carol used the notebook to track income and expenses as each sale occurred. As its maker and the distributor handling the transactions, she has personal knowledge and can explain the recordkeeping. Contemporaneous financial bookkeeping ordinarily gives a participant a practical reason to record amounts accurately. The notebook was not described as an accusation prepared for prosecutors after arrest. Her later plea bargain supplies a reason to scrutinize testimony, but does not automatically make previously created business records inadmissible. On these facts the foundation is substantially established, subject to the court's trustworthiness assessment.

The prosecution may alternatively invoke the coconspirator exception if it independently establishes the requisite conspiracy and shows that the records were made during and in furtherance of it. Tracking receipts and sales can further a continuing distribution venture. Carol testified that her customers agreed to resell cocaine, supporting an inference of coordinated distribution. Nevertheless, a buyer-seller transaction alone does not invariably establish one encompassing conspiracy among every customer. Records about other people cannot automatically be attributed to Des without proof linking him to the relevant common scheme. The business-record ground is therefore more direct on this record.

Carol's statements are not ordinary opposing-party admissions by Des merely because she was a codefendant before severance. Nor does the recorded-recollection exception automatically apply: the question does not say she lacks present memory or establish its other prerequisites. Identifying several possible exceptions should not replace applying the one actually supported.

3. Which pages should be admitted?

Pages 3–4 include sales to Des during the charged period and likely are admissible under the supported business-record foundation. Entries about other buyers may supply relevant operational context, but the court can redact irrelevant material or limit its use. Pages 1–2 concern January through April sales to people other than Des. They may help show the recordkeeping method or a proved larger enterprise, yet they do not prove Des participated in those specific sales.

Under section 352 the court should weigh that contextual value against confusion, undue consumption of time, and unfair prejudice from suggesting Des is responsible for every transaction in the notebook. Redaction, a limiting instruction, or a more focused foundation may be appropriate. The fact that the indictment includes January does not by itself make unrelated January transactions evidence of Des's guilt. Thus, admission of the Des entries is well supported; admission of every other entry without a relevant contextual or conspiracy foundation is more contestable. The notebook should not be rejected wholesale merely because some entries do not name him.

The Confrontation Clause supplies no strong independent objection to private contemporaneous bookkeeping created to run a drug business rather than to provide evidence for prosecution. Such records ordinarily are nontestimonial. Carol also testified and was subject to cross-examination about the records and her motives. Her criminal activity and bargain affect weight and impeachment, not an automatic constitutional exclusion of all her records.

4. The forgery conviction

California permits impeachment with qualifying felony convictions, subject in a criminal case to the moral-turpitude principles and section 352 balancing. Forgery directly involves dishonesty and moral turpitude. Asking Des about the conviction on cross-examination is an ordinarily permissible method of proving it, and he admitted it.

The fact that it occurred eleven years earlier raises remoteness, but California does not simply apply the Federal Rule 609 ten-year presumption as a categorical cutoff. The court considers the conviction's bearing on credibility, age, similarity to the charged offense, and other relevant prejudice and fairness concerns. The facts do not describe subsequent conduct or release dates, so those should not be invented.

Forgery has substantial credibility value, and its dissimilarity to cocaine possession reduces the danger that jurors will use it as propensity evidence for the charged drug offense. Remoteness weighs against admission and may carry greater force if Des otherwise led a law-abiding life, but that history is not supplied. After a proper section 352 exercise, admission is defensible and likely proper. The court should limit its use to credibility rather than proof that a prior felon probably committed the present crime.

5. The plea arrangement and attorney-client privilege

The defense is entitled to expose a witness's incentive to curry favor with the prosecution. Evidence that Carol received reduced charges in exchange for testifying is strongly relevant to bias, particularly after she denied receiving a reduced sentence. A distinction between charges and sentence may affect exactly how misleading the answer was, but does not eliminate the relevance of the bargain.

Attorney-client privilege belongs to the client and protects qualifying confidential lawyer-client communications. The existence and operative terms of a plea bargain communicated to the prosecutor are not confidential communications merely because a defense lawyer negotiated them. Abe can testify to the exchange of reduced charges for testimony without revealing private advice or confidential discussions with Carol.

Pete is not the holder of Carol's privilege. Even if a privilege claim is properly raised on her behalf, the described question asks about the bargain, not protected legal advice. The court therefore properly denied the asserted protection. It should still protect genuinely confidential communications if later questions reach them; taking the stand does not automatically waive every attorney-client discussion. The agreement's terms also have significance as an operative arrangement and evidence of bias, rather than simply as an out-of-court factual accusation against Des. Their admission lets the jury assess Carol's incentive and correct any misleading impression about her cooperation.

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